the Human ship "The Star Hammer" is orbiting Equestria it is slowly approaching the planet, on bored are over 400,000 Humans, 50% being civilian, 30% are Military and the remaining 20% are Wailand Yutani Scientists, but on bored, unknown by all but the Military Personnel.... (epic story continues) The human ship "_Star Hammer" _ is slowly approaching Equestria, carrying over 400,000 humans, roughly divided as 50% being civilian, 30% military and the remaining 20% being Weyland Yutani scientists. Known only to military personnel, onboard the ship are.... - Specific percentages is poor writing but could possibly be excused as being relevant information later on in the story - "unknown by all but the Military Personnel", meaning that this huge secret is only known by 1/3 of people onboard the ship meaning 120,000 out of 400,000 passengers know the 'secret' assuming not a single one of them has told their non-military friend, partner or family member - Using capital initial for a word does not cool make If the whole first page was analyzed (it already appears to have been analized) it would produce many times more remarks than the length of the text itself. In short, trying to fix the story would require all of it to be rewritten entirely and certain plot elements and choices would need to be changed. Other than that I really enjoyed reading it!
Don't know why I haven't posted this here before. But there's a TF2 server I play on that's a modified version of the Vs Saxton Hale game mode. It replaces the boss with pony models. Each boss has different abilities and even music. Besides the custom bosses, most of the weapons are heavily modified too. You kind find the servers here: http://ponyville.net/ for example Rarity is a spy based boss and can disguise and sometimes turn invisible. And Derpy is a pyro based boss.
After watching drawponies's video on how to draw ponies, I decided to give it a try. :btears: <--- Apparently I made a new emote today, with my amazing GIMP 2 skills! He totally sounds like Aziz Ansari This is the result...
It was a valiant first effort. Remember - "The first step at being good at something, is being bad at it." -Confucius, probably
Aye. I could show my first few lines of code if they hadn't been nuked along with the hard drive. Skills only develop with practice.
